mitbbs.com
  首页 -分类讨论区 - 海外生活 - 探亲与陪读版 - 同主题阅读文章
  首页
  分类广告
分类讨论区
  移民专栏
新闻中心
  精华区
  未名博客
  俱乐部
  未名形象秀
  未名黄页
  未名交友
  未名人才
未名交友
[更多]
[更多]
www.sustc.edu.cn/cn/joinus/hrnotes/
/yellowpage/ent_info.php?id=65133
同主题阅读:求建议改进给VO的信
[版面:探亲与陪读][首篇作者:ocatx] , 2013年01月30日16:06:04
[分页:1 ]
ocatx
进入未名形象秀
我的博客
[回复] [回信给作者] [本篇全文] [本讨论区] [修改] [删除] [转寄] [转贴] [收藏] [举报] [ 1 ]

发信人: ocatx (铁牛), 信区: Reunion
标  题: 求建议改进给VO的信
发信站: BBS 未名空间站 (Wed Jan 30 16:06:04 2013, 美东)

Dear Visa Officer,

My name is Myself, the son of the applicants Father and Mother, requesting
your grant for my parents’ B2 visitor visas.

My parents and I have been planning for this 3-month family reunion for a
while. We have been trying to make it easy and efficient, and it turns out
the best way is for my parents to visit me in the United States. As working
professionals, both my wife and I are quite busy and it is very hard for us
to accommodate our schedules for an international trip. In addition, our
kids are both less than three years old, and I think a 24-hour long trip
will be too demanding for them at this point. My parents understand our
situations and they would love to come to visit us.    

In addition, there is no better time than now for them to visit us. My
sister just went to college last year, and now my parents have more free
time to travel around. They care about and want to know how our lives are
like in the US and have shown a great interest in a bus tour to New York,
Washington, San Francisco, Chicago, and other world-famous metropolitan
cities. To show how grateful we are for their visiting, my wife and I are
very glad to pay for all their travel expenses. Attached is a tentative
schedule for a trip to the east coast.

My parents have no intention to immigrate into the United States. In fact,
they are typical old-fashioned Chinese. They live in the same small town in
which they were born and got a huge extended family there. My father has two
brothers and three sisters, and my mother has one brother and four sisters.
My parents are closely bonded to them and their own families. They really
enjoy this big relative network in our hometown. Although traveling in other
places from time to time, they have never thought about leaving their
relatives with whom they have been living for over a half century. Please
see attached pictures for a big happy family!

This trip is just a temporary arrangement. As I have mentioned above, they
really enjoy their current life in China. Both of them have decent pension
incomes. My mother is still employed at a supermarket because she enjoys
working. Neither of them speaks English and they will definitely come back
to their hometown after this trip.

Please kindly consider their request for visitor visas. We will deeply
appreciate your great help.

Sincerely,


Myself

Enclosures:
1.    Bus tour itinerary (Spring or Summer, 2013)
2.    Pictures for a Big Happy Family

--

※ 来源:·WWW 未名空间站 海外: mitbbs.com 中国: mitbbs.cn·[FROM: 134.]

 
ocatx
进入未名形象秀
我的博客
[回复] [回信给作者] [本篇全文] [本讨论区] [修改] [删除] [转寄] [转贴] [收藏] [举报] [ 2 ]

发信人: ocatx (铁牛), 信区: Reunion
标  题: Re: 求建议改进给VO的信
发信站: BBS 未名空间站 (Thu Jan 31 09:23:38 2013, 美东)

只有一页,是不是有点短啊?我看前几天有个MM写了好几页,分几点论述被邀请人一定
会回国。这信到底多长合适啊,麻烦过来人指点一二吧,多谢了。有没有人把签证材料
的Index也放到这信里的?
--

※ 来源:·WWW 未名空间站 海外: mitbbs.com 中国: mitbbs.cn·[FROM: 134.]

 
bluesinfonia
进入未名形象秀
我的博客
[回复] [回信给作者] [本篇全文] [本讨论区] [修改] [删除] [转寄] [转贴] [收藏] [举报] [ 3 ]

发信人: bluesinfonia (Blue Sinfonia || Blue Life), 信区: Reunion
标  题: Re: 求建议改进给VO的信
发信站: BBS 未名空间站 (Thu Jan 31 18:20:06 2013, 美东)

我反倒觉得太长太啰嗦了,而且重点偏了,前面两大段都在写来美国的理由,反复强调
你们忙,再一提孩子,明显就是让父母来帮忙带孩子的。对比之下,后面回国的理由就
弱了很多。另外签证就那么几分钟的事,没有哪个签证官会仔细读几页纸的信,把关键
点写清楚就够了。

一家之言,祝你好运!
--

※ 来源:·WWW 未名空间站 海外: mitbbs.com 中国: mitbbs.cn·[FROM: 130.]

 
ocatx
进入未名形象秀
我的博客
[回复] [回信给作者] [本篇全文] [本讨论区] [修改] [删除] [转寄] [转贴] [收藏] [举报] [ 4 ]

发信人: ocatx (铁牛), 信区: Reunion
标  题: Re: 求建议改进给VO的信
发信站: BBS 未名空间站 (Fri Feb  1 01:26:31 2013, 美东)

多谢建议。把孩子那块儿删掉了。
--

※ 来源:·WWW 未名空间站 海外: mitbbs.com 中国: mitbbs.cn·[FROM: 76.]

[分页:1 ]
[快速返回] [ 进入探亲与陪读讨论区] [返回顶部]
回复文章
标题:
内 容:

未名交友
将您的链接放在这儿

友情链接


中美机票签证预约
 

Site Map - Contact Us - Terms and Conditions - Privacy Policy

版权所有,未名空间(mitbbs.com),since 1996